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Vendetta.

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Let's go swimming in the corpse pit.
Make friends with the deceased.
Play them a funeral march fit for a king.
What else would we do, fall in love?

I wish you were here with me right now,
smothered in love and sprinkled with horror.
Love is fear and fear is love
so you must be a heartbreaker, Sweetheart.

So here's to revenge, vendetta's all round,
Oh waiter can we get some more glasses over here please?
Pull up a chair and take a drag out of me.
A flash of teeth and a flash of the knife,
remove the circulatory organ from it's oh so rightful place.

Oh Baby, you're a killer,
with that lie on your lips and poison in your kiss.
Please take that knife out of my head,
it's starting to itch a little.
Well that's not very lady like at all

Is that a halo in your hand?
YAY!
I finally submitted what I see as my greatest piece of Literature ever.
I do so hope you like it too, especially you *waves-of-illusion ;)

My oh so brilliant Preview was created by the one and only ~Crowdwatcher. A very talented gentleman who kindly accepted my proposition.
He also gave me a genius idea for a title, which sadly wouldn't fit in the Title box.
The full title is Vendetta (Love in the Corpse Pit)
I recommend you go and look at his work.
Oh and while you're at it, please comment on the original deviation of the Preview here: [link]

Thankyou again ~Crowdwatcher, i'll have your gift up soon. :)

Please leave comments and critique for my poem here and any for the image on the original Deviation.
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The-Literati's avatar
Wow I must agree, this is indeed a fantastic piece of work, I am glad you turned my attention to it. I don't get a chance to go through every piece in someone's back record of deviations. But wow, absolutely fab work.